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lirik lagu antonio sgro - test 1

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hi marcello
good intro, just instead of saying “and this is why” just say “public speaking is an important sk!ll to learn because it increases your communication sk!lls, and had the ability to allow you to make a difference in the world

there is no need for the last line. remove it. also, stay clear of using “i”, “me” or “my”

overall good job, just needs a little fixing to tighten it up structurally

a. edwardson2:08 pm


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